Looks nice from what I can see. Can't really comment about gameplay without testing it online, though. Maybe you should join the #soldat.mapping IRC channel on Quakenet? You can test your maps there with real players!
I gave up on IRC years ago. All the hip kids moved on since. But that's just my opinion really, Besides my net sucks too much right now to play games online without severe lagspikes right now, Even small-net games like SOLDAT
From: October 16, 2010, 08:24:34 am
Biggest complaints I can see so far is the flags being perhaps TOO close to the teamspawns, And perhaps the STAT gun placements.
Some might think the STAT guns are too close to the endzones, But you can still get horribly murdered manning them, And the only way to shoot them at the flag hallways is by being a master aimer (Even 3-4 pixels off aim won't hit @#$%)