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Offline The_Chad

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Ctf_Tw_Redhill
« on: September 01, 2006, 05:30:26 pm »
This is just the starting of my map it will be the first one i will have done, plz give me some positive advice no negative

Offline jettlarue

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Re: Ctf_Tw_Redhill
« Reply #1 on: September 01, 2006, 05:32:20 pm »
noone is going to give you any advice if you only want positive, cus if its positive it means you have done something perfectly.

Offline Bgretydews

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Re: Ctf_Tw_Redhill
« Reply #2 on: September 01, 2006, 05:49:01 pm »
Positive advise? Thats impossible, if its advise then its got to be something you can improve upon
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Offline The_Chad

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Re: Ctf_Tw_Redhill
« Reply #3 on: September 01, 2006, 06:18:46 pm »
i meant like nothing like you suck and you shouldnt do that that type of negative aedvice i just want advice

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Re: Ctf_Tw_Redhill
« Reply #4 on: September 01, 2006, 06:31:01 pm »
Cons: >:D
The colors are plain.
The shading is mediocre.
The texture is boring and uninspired.
The terrain is mostly flat with no cover.
You have yet to add scenery.
The border on the right in completely undifined.
The border on the left doesn't go smoothly with the ground.
The background is just lame.
The name is misleading, seeing as there are no hills.
Though I can't tell perfectly, it doesn't look very big.
Your signature is tasteless and also breaks the forum's rules.
If I hadn't said this you'd have asked how it was breaking the rules.

Pros: :D
Everything that's wrong can be fixed.
I've seen much worse.
It is red as implied by the name.
You don't suck.

Sorry, if this seems really harsh.
« Last Edit: September 01, 2006, 07:18:03 pm by Wraithlike »

Offline Keron Cyst

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Re: Ctf_Tw_Redhill
« Reply #5 on: September 01, 2006, 06:42:42 pm »
Also pro: it has nice shading, although rather plain (only red & black). And yeah, use better BGs.

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Re: Ctf_Tw_Redhill
« Reply #6 on: September 02, 2006, 04:07:09 pm »
find a decent texture, I can't really make any other comments with that tiny piece of the map.

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Re: Ctf_Tw_Redhill
« Reply #7 on: September 02, 2006, 05:55:05 pm »
I dislike the background, the texture, that little bridge...

Is this a hellish-themed map or what?

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