My first try at a gun~

[13579]

This is my first try making a gun that was just not a bigger pic that I sized down and made look better.

Its a patriot from metal gear solid 3.


Pic:

[Plonkoon]

The gray chunk in the middle looks really out of place, it needs some shading.

[numgun]

barrel looks ok, but all the other stuff from it to the left is... a big grey chunk as Plonkoon said.
You might also want to add a handle to it. (the back handle thing)

[O.R.I.O.N.]

The body is way too chunky, and where's the rest of the stock?

[13579]

The body is way too chunky, and where's the rest of the stock?

I think i might of uploaded the wrong one, let me look.....

Also, the patriot has no stock.

[Mistercharles]

Looks pretty darn good, but it needs the classic black border that all soldat weaps have.

[yamo]

looks good cept needs more detail in the middle/main part of the gun

[Ziem]

Did u use mspaint to do it? 
it looks like ... gray/black thing (dunno what is that )   

[Wolf_Man]

It looks pretty nice but i think it should do with a black outline or maybe an increse in size.

[Wraithlike]

I hope you don't mind, but I took it and sexified it a little. Don't take that badly though, because it looks really nice.

[numgun]

^^^^ now THATS what im talking about! GJ Wraithlike!

[O.R.I.O.N.]

Ooooo...pretty...   Nice one, though the barrel looks a bit funky with the stripes of black.  Try orderly dots, like on an M16.

[Death MachineX350]

The gray chunk in the middle looks really out of place, it needs some shading.

True.