Thunderpantz Comix :P

[ThunderPantz]

I was thinkin about makin some comics of my own.. this is how it would turn out.



If you want me to continue, just post and say so

Constructive criticism i would like

[Outcast]

I've had enough of child gaming humor.

[Chakra]

Constructive criticism....


...it's shit.

[Sotija]

My....Eyes.....Are....Burning.

[Valorman]

Please, dont make anymore.

[Toumaz]

I think previous posts pretty much sums up my opinion it too. Seriously, MS Paint is no cool comic making program, except in rare cases... and you're not one of those.

[O.R.I.O.N.]

....<twitch>

[Kyklis]

No. There are times when sub-par drawings can work, and this is not one of them.

[ds dude]

That comic looks like crap,and dont even say that my comics look like crap because i already kniw.

[ThunderPantz]

And thats how terrible i can do at 3:57 Am when i can't sleep o_o

[Eagles_Arrows]

Sloppy comic is sloooppy.

[Zegovia]

Why cant we give him what he wants people? 

1: the texts above the players heads, you can use the regular text tool (with smaller size though) instead of writing it by hand, i can barely make it out..... 

2: make a box for the Chat text, its overlapping the backround.. 

3: i bet the soldiers will appreciate a little more detail, like a belt, soccom holster, grenades. 

4: color it... and abit more scenery wouldnt hurt...

5: you dont have any text for the sound effects, like *BANG!!* and ARGH!! and MUHAHAHAHAHA!!! ..

And make the path of the bullet a grey line instead... and yellow muzzleflashes on the guns...

6: Blood and gore!!! 

7: The seventh thing would be the spelling, but i think that's the whole point of the comic... i laughed abit to the "will teh hack0r learn to spell", you could change it to "Will teh artist learn how to spell...." instead...
if it had that twitch it might have been better...

Also: remember that the most importrant part of a strip is the ending of it, its then where the point and twist of the joke is revealed....

"A joke shall blow like a storm or burst like steam....."

There i hope ive been of use...

[ThunderPantz]

Thanks alot Zegovia, and this concludes my comix making until i get better comic making skills and get a better comic makin program thingy.     


In teh last comix Thunderpantz got the flag. But fortunately he got stuck in a bugged poly and can't come out until i get better comix making skills.

[Zegovia]

Thanks alot Zegovia, and this concludes my comix making until i get better comic making skills and get a better comic makin program thingy.


In teh last comix Thunderpantz got the flag. But fortunately he got stuck in a bugged poly and can't come out until i get better comix making skills.

I suggest you get.... errrr.... flash....

[CheeSeMan.]

stop lolz.

[NorrisScott]

Good programs for comic designs:

Adobe Photoshop or Illustrator, Macromedia Flash, MS Paint

Since I doubt you have Photoshop, Illustrator or Flash, and since it's generally not suggested that one promote warez'ing, I would suggest working on your paint skills. Steady hands will help

[Outcast]

Annnnnd it's time to lock this until he decides to come out with his brand new super comix. Until then, sayonara thunderpantz comix.