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[mrv]

Hi, I'm making weapons in free time and please for comments and suggestions. [I don't speak English well, sorry]

Glock 19  :


Ruger 77  :
;

MP3K  :


DESERT EAGLE  :


FAMAS  :
; ;

HK417  :


AWP (for my cs:s mod)  :


AK47 (for my cs:s mod)  :

[Smiechu]

Glock is better than ruger. Ruger is too empty, how about making a bolt ?

[-Skykanden-]

I'm agree with Simechu, make a bolt and dont do it that looks that 3d, or add more clear colours

[mrv]

Thanks you very much!

I add bolt to ruger and add MP3K.

[-Skykanden-]

Thats not a bolt... thats a picatinny rail

Just wondering... are you resizing the weapons?

[mrv]

Just wondering... are you resizing the weapons?

No...

- Added Desert Eagle, please comments

[Smiechu]

Ruger v2 looks like a shotgun.
MPK is too bright at right and too dark at left.
Eagle is too empty at upper part.
And don't make shadows it's easy to make them so everyone can. BUT if someone want to remove them - it'ś hard.

In Polish:
Druga wersja rugera wygląda jak shotgun :O. MPK jest za ciemne po lewej stronie, a za jasne po prawej. Eagle ma za mało detali na zamku. Nie rób cieni do broni bo trudno je usunąć, a może ktoś będzie chciał bez cienia?

[The Bone Collector]

Eagle looks good, but you might wanna fix it a bit.

Edit: So I took your eagle and decided to have a lil' play with it. I think I may have made it worse, but you need to take details from the picture your copying from (like from wordguns.ru) and stick them into the gun.

[-Skykanden-]

I really liek your DE

That mp5k haves a too long magazine and in general is too little from the body

[mrv]

Thanks guys

Smiechu: I know English but my writing skill is very low Shadow is hard to remove? huh, this is easy Thanks for bolt pic.

[Dairy]

Nice weapons but please could you stay in one topic ? If for example I would make a topic for every single weapon I made I would spat modding thread for months.

Critique:
-Ruger got some weird proportions.

-MP5K has got too fat clip.

-Desert Eagle. Hmm well, is that actually a DE ?

Overall it's a nice pack and I see youve got talent. So let's see you future weapons.

Good luck.

[mrv]

Nice weapons but please could you stay in one topic ? If for example I would make a topic for every single weapon I made I would spat modding thread for months.

I know, I know, sorry.

- Added FAMAS

edit:
- Fixed FAMAS, this is hard to me

[Dairy]

Hmm. Focus more on the shape and on some more difficult shading. As I see youre trying to rush it. It isnt like that.

[Mangled*]

Famas and Rugers look fantastic.

The Glock's shape is perfect but the colour isn't that great.

Mp5 is nice.

Desert Eagle is okay, the shape is wrong though but it looks nice.

 

[mrv]

Thanks

- Added HK417

[Smiechu]

Thanks

- Added HK417

Handle sucks :/.

[-Skykanden-]

The 417... seems have a good shading. But your stock is too long! Also fix the handle

Hey take your time, i think you woud start better with paint. Try to make one with

[mrv]

Thanks for comments,
I want to make a cs:source mod for soldat, I started make awp ( paint-style, only shadow is added in photoshop )  - here is it :

without shadow:

with shadow:


I continue this tomorrow...

[Boots]

To shiny. D:

[mrv]

I like that

- Added awp