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Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« on: April 07, 2008, 06:40:21 am »
Hello people.This is my first release to SoldatForums,but you can believe it is not the last one.This is a near-future combined Sci-Fi weapon which i call it The Predator.Just like the topic,it has a fancy name.I hope you like it.

 


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The Predator | Airborne



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A brand new weapon,the Cr0ssfire.



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« Last Edit: April 10, 2008, 06:18:02 am by Stasi »

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Re: The Elegance Of Bruteforce - The Predator
« Reply #1 on: April 07, 2008, 07:00:32 am »
Well, nice story for that weapon :P
Shading seems ok, but that clip is too low, make it near to the weapon body. The bipod is a bit strange, gives to me an idea of a fixed bipod that you cant gange the position

Is this your first mod? We cannot be sure because you putted: 'This is my first release'

Good luck

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Re: The Elegance Of Bruteforce - The Predator
« Reply #2 on: April 07, 2008, 07:23:43 am »
Yep,Skykanden.This is my first mod.I am going to make some changes on the weapon,thanks for your review.

Date Posted: April 07, 2008, 08:04:50 am

I have made an Airborne version,which you could like more than the first one.

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Re: The Elegance Of Bruteforce - The Predator
« Reply #3 on: April 07, 2008, 07:33:15 am »
Ok now its better

Have you made some other weapons?

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Re: The Elegance Of Bruteforce - The Predator
« Reply #4 on: April 09, 2008, 02:05:38 pm »
No?

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Except some tryings,which were really crap.

Date Posted: April 07, 2008, 08:40:39 am
New weapon added!

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Re: The Elegance Of Bruteforce - The Predator
« Reply #5 on: April 09, 2008, 02:26:21 pm »
Well looks good.
You should take image for bases, and look at the details. Never do square'ish forms

Look at some weapons, learn a bit more about shading and then make a weapon without bases, but i think that first of all is taking other images (futuristic or not)

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Re: The Elegance Of Bruteforce - The Predator
« Reply #6 on: April 10, 2008, 05:24:07 am »
But the ORIGINAL PROPERTY of cr0ssfire is having a squaerish form.

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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #7 on: April 10, 2008, 06:48:30 am »
I mean in general, some other should say his oppinion about those weapons... where is everyone?!

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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #8 on: April 10, 2008, 06:53:44 am »
it's too clumpy, You can't pull off the squarish look, Also, also, do you have shading, I can't tell.
But very nice for a first mod.
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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #9 on: April 11, 2008, 03:08:46 pm »
Another new weapon.A pistol,this time.Night2alon


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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #10 on: April 11, 2008, 04:09:45 pm »
Good shading, i really like it
Continue by that way
Why you dont put names like real weapons?

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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #11 on: April 11, 2008, 04:11:23 pm »
Coz it's not a real weapon?
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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #12 on: April 11, 2008, 05:40:19 pm »
Actually,its name is Night2alon?

Date Posted: April 11, 2008, 06:32:35 pm
I have made some shading improvements on that gun.


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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #13 on: April 12, 2008, 06:00:34 pm »
Looks a bit big..
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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #14 on: April 13, 2008, 11:20:28 am »
IT IS big.Thats the only minus point about it.

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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #15 on: April 13, 2008, 08:32:32 pm »
Make it smaller then? Big weapons are ugly :E.
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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #16 on: April 13, 2008, 08:42:29 pm »
I like them!  I dont mind the size really, but could you show some screenshots with them in the weapons menu please?

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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #17 on: April 14, 2008, 12:20:11 am »
IT IS big.Thats the only minus point about it.

Well, to make this clear, the only minus you pointed is the biggest problem, too big weapons would overlap and thats pretty bad.

On the other hand the weapons are actually nice.

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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #18 on: April 16, 2008, 06:44:47 am »
Dairy,what are the sizes for a pistol you recommend to me?

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Re: Terminal Stage | The Elegance Of Brainpiercing
« Reply #19 on: April 16, 2008, 09:17:31 am »
Keep the sizes of your interface graphics within the general size of the origionals. It removes overlapping problems, for one.
To sum up my point: We had a multipage debate about toilet padding. (Putting TP in the water so you don't get splashed.)
And we still don't know if dead guys can keep a stiffy.