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Offline Kiba Inuzuka [UT]

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Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« on: January 18, 2009, 01:06:01 pm »
I made a modification to Soldat ... it's only AK-74 replaced to Beryl Wz.96, but please good evaluation...sorry for my english...
DOWNLOAD - http://rapidshare.com/files/185559109/Beryl_Wz.96.zip.html



WATCH OUT - This mod is not compatible with other modded weapons
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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2009, 04:05:23 am »
|Review  =--
The design and detail is simple and smooth with accuracy.
Shading is light and uncomplicated.
Sounds aren't high quality but fits.
 |Comments  =--
Simple, Smooth, Light.
The outline is accurate and shapes the actual weapon.
Nothing really eye-popping but nice clean style.
Weapons with the same style would really compliment each other if put together.
Better than mine. ;D
 |Help/Ideas/Suggestions  =--
Shading needs tweaking a bit. [A bit too light]
Study other's work. Don't copy but use different techniques and
fuse those techniques with your own.
Tweak, Tweak, Tweak.
Hope to see more from you.

 |Score  =--
7.8/10

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« Last Edit: January 19, 2009, 05:22:51 am by Krack »
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Offline Kiba Inuzuka [UT]

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2009, 05:08:20 am »
it's my first "Dairy like" weapon...since I got good scores, it probably my new style may fit all around: D

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2009, 05:30:28 am »
Dairy makes the weapons out of proportion, to preserve details, while at the same time making it look and 'feel' good, even if it means cutting the barrel in half or something (when the image overlaps, common in sniper rifles).  you've done a good job of this, and it looks very good.

 but the shading is way too low contrast, I was surprised to find that you were using more than 4 colours.. so manually crank up the contrast a bit (not by adjusting contrast settings, it's better to re-shade it on your own)

very well laid out/executed, keep working on the shading. (the contrast that is)

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #4 on: January 21, 2009, 09:07:36 am »
Well the weapon is not bad at all. The proportions are kind of similar to me.

Some things about the weapon itself =
-the outline isnt properly finished on the clip.
-the upper part is kind of fat in comparsion to the holding thing and clip.
-the thing on the left is too small
-you need much more colors, I can see just few but if its the part of your style its okay, it makes it some kind of special

Offline Kiba Inuzuka [UT]

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #5 on: January 21, 2009, 11:31:25 am »
So i do more! ;D

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #6 on: January 21, 2009, 02:03:08 pm »
Looks like a modified version of my ak :P

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #7 on: January 21, 2009, 03:18:07 pm »
Looks like a modified version of my ak :P

I could say the same...

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #8 on: January 23, 2009, 09:20:19 am »
You should delete it if you copied and modified it. Im a newbie too but I dont copy stuff from others. If you asked me for permission ( I wrote it fat-red under my mod)
I would give you the permission to 'train' your skills on my weapons. But now I want that you remove it.

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #9 on: January 23, 2009, 02:51:04 pm »
That looks awsome, but I'll pass since I like my weapons at this moment  :P

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #10 on: January 23, 2009, 02:57:06 pm »
omfg xD

Stupid dump + spam. Clear it out.

You should delete it if you copied and modified it. Im a newbie too but I dont copy stuff from others. If you asked me for permission ( I wrote it fat-red under my mod)
I would give you the permission to 'train' your skills on my weapons. But now I want that you remove it.

And you should shut up before you know if it's really weapon of yours. You know. those weapons are from real model. That means if 20 people are making them into 16x30 pixel picture THEY look similar. So do the outline. Get over it. Or post some proof, damn it.

On the other hand if you're true and he used ANY outline which doesn't belong to his work it means he should creditize the author.

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #11 on: January 23, 2009, 04:40:21 pm »
I said if





Check yourself! And every modder has his individual style of making weapons. And this one is quiet similiar to my style

(Compare your weapons with the weapons of field marshal :P if you want see some 'style')
« Last Edit: January 23, 2009, 04:42:23 pm by Sh07gaN »

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #12 on: January 23, 2009, 06:29:44 pm »
That's a proof ? It just looks similar, I agree. But that doesn't mean he's a thief, anyway. This is not my work to compare, only the author can clear this out or admin lock this.

What If I compare them ? I don't get the point.

EDIT: By the way, I looked 2nd time. And the weapons are kind different for me it's just poor luck that some parts are similar. It's just the way everybody is making those parts similar. I could care and do this everytime somebody is making something. This scene isn't releasing anything special anymore so I'm not really wondering to be honest and on the end I just want to mention you're comparing two same weapons. AK's or whatever so they're supposed to look similar, ain't they ?

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #13 on: January 23, 2009, 07:34:52 pm »
I really doubt it was stolen, the clip and front grip are completely different.

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #14 on: January 23, 2009, 08:32:58 pm »
Not to mention the whole foregrip assembly.

Anyways, who the hell would want to steal your outlines? If I was lazy I'd go for Papasurf. You'd be pretty far down the list.
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Offline Kiba Inuzuka [UT]

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #15 on: January 25, 2009, 05:19:59 pm »
i'm not a pirate...this is my own style...peace

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Re: Beryl Wz.96 for Ak-74
« Reply #16 on: January 29, 2009, 08:23:00 am »
I don't see why people think other people's work is based off theirs.
Like Dairy said...

those weapons are from real model. That means if 20 people are making them into 16x30 pixel picture THEY look similar. So do the outline. Get over it.

All who believe it's your style want you to keep making weapons for Soldat.
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