The Key in Your Hand (fast punk-rock)

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http://nrk.no/urort/Laat/307981/default.aspx <--- just click play---<
http://nrk.no/urort/Artist/LettersUnread/default.aspx#top <--all my music--<

 its a freaky looking link, i know, but its just music. have a go!

i made this punk song. i play the drums, and sing and everything.

its called The key in your hand.


living it down,
you fell from the fall.
a thorn in your side,
and a knife in your soul.
no one to blame,
you had everything.
directional doors,
the key in your hand.

pay the prize,
for everyone who's fallen by your lies,
i guess,
the struggle beats internal happiness.
okey,
society will fuck you up one day.
good luck,
to everyone my honesty offends,
i'm sorry.

losing yourself,
you twisted your fate,
you can't turn around,
its already to late.
once you have tried,
the bright darker side,
its hard to let go,
temptations will grow.

you will see,
freedom is not the same as liberty.
you doubt.
i had my day, but barely made it out.
i guess,
the guilt defeats internal happiness.
again.
there's nothing i can say in my defence.
i'm sorry.

[Blacksheepboy]

This is better than I anticipated. The beginning caught my attention.

But, I do have to say that I don't really care for the singing style - that's just me. I'm biased toward punk-rock.

[-Vis-]

It has a distinct similarity to Machinae Supremacy (except for the non-existent SID effects, of course).

Unlike many, I actually enjoy their vocalist's style, and I enjoyed this too.

[L[0ne]R]

I really liked the music, but vocals - not so much. Lyrics are a bit generic too (IMHO).
Overall it's still it's pretty decent.

There's a nice variety in other tracks, each of them sounds different from another (though I havent listened to every single one of them, but those I have listened all have a slightly different feel to them).

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thanks for the comments guys!
glad you liked it.

[Wraithlike]

I'm not a big punk fan, but I like it a lot, way to go. You're a very talented musician.

[The Bone Collector]

Sounds awesome. Nice work guys, I'll keep an eye out for you...

[-Major-]

There's a nice variety in other tracks, each of them sounds different from another (though I havent listened to every single one of them, but those I have listened all have a slightly different feel to them).

I dunno... I think the guitar is the same almost every song...

The singing is too loud and the instruments are too quiet.

[L[0ne]R]

There's a nice variety in other tracks, each of them sounds different from another (though I havent listened to every single one of them, but those I have listened all have a slightly different feel to them).

I dunno... I think the guitar is the same almost every song...

Not sure what exactly you mean, but if you mean the sound of the guitar - it's natural for certain instruments sound a bit similar to other songs. This creates "style" and makes songs feel like they're actually made by the same artist.
The guitar might sound the same, but the motifs are different, and I think that's good enough.

The singing is too loud and the instruments are too quiet.

Yeah, I got that feeling too, but I thought maybe it's just me. I guess not. :S

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yes, i quess the guitar may sound pretty much the same, but all bands and artist run the same style for a while.
thanks for listening everyone! new songs will arrive soon!

[-Major-]

other than the singing and instrument volume... I think it's great :p. so looking forward to more songs :3

[PopeJohnPaul_II]

hah as if punk rock requires talent. It's just unorganized screaming vocals put to the same old boring guitar chords repeated over and over.

I dunno... I think the guitar is the same almost every song...

The singing is too loud and the instruments are too quiet.

THIS