How could you even think of touching moonshine? it's like the Ash of infiltration....
On top of that sad bit of news, sorry mate, but it looks worse than before. Some of the polies have been changed, mainly in the lower route, but I can't see why you felt it needed to be fixed.
I won't elaborate, no point really, the current moonshine is perfect in my opinion.
Sadly, the truth hurts.
But keep trying (other maps that need help ofc), you never know.