My proposal to sister Madison

[smiluu]

We promised a date this following monday. I have ordered a table in a high quality finnish restaurant, outside the house's terrace with an enthralling sight straight down to the ocean. I have requested a soundproof door closing all the sound coming out or in the inside restaurant, above and besides us we have atmospheric lighting and chopin playing in the background. A menu which contains shrimp soup for appetizer and a tenderloin steak with garlic butter, baked potato and green salad made of the season's best ingredients for the main course. Drinks contains a glass of water and for the wine politics the f**kily expensive Jacques Selosse Initial Blanc de Blancs should do. We will enjoy the tasty and soft shrimp soup at our own pace and once the main course comes to the table it will be my time to ask the important question. I will slowly observe as she penetrates the edge of her medium fried steak with her meat knife and scrapes the garlic butter between her fork and the bit she just cut. She will proceed inserting the bit in her mouth and this will be my moment, when she least expects it. I've had this small ring box kept in my left hand for a while now and I've been nervously waiting for my moment to make my proposal.

She has the bit in her mouth, OK NOW! I stand up and slowly, but strongly stomp my left hand including the ring box to the table. I bend my upper body closer to her and follow up with an elbow strike straight to her mouth. The fork the b***h was still gnawing on caused fierce damage to her tonque, gum and the top to bottom layers of her pharynx. Oh the vicious purling sound her vocal cords struggle to push through the blood running down all the directions inside her neck. I take her meat knife and slice her both eyes open, I take the steaks from our plates and stuff one in both of her eyes. The muscles around her eyes vibrate by a reflex causing the steaks roll both in different directions. She looks like a f**king cricket LOL. I take the ring out of the box and tape it to the top of my cum moist pleasure limb. The ring has diamonds so it should cause a warm feeling of friction as I enter her throat and grind back and forth. It feels so good so I can't say whats f**king what inside there, I feel her tonque scar rags between the wrinkles of my foreskin and below the hook of my glans. Bending down the steaks to poke my balls as I hump her face was a creative and an effective idea for extra pleasure.

Now the body language is done and it's time to spit out what I have to say; "Madison, you mean everything to me. I love you from the bottom of my heart. Will you marry me?" There was a moment of silence, then she said: "Purll durlll". I did not understand so I took my glitterstick out of her mouth to hear what she had to say. "Pulrlrl rulrlr, rurululrl" she said. I noticed the ring had disappeared from the top of my cock along with the tape which must mean she has accepted my ring and proposal. What a joyful day. After mumbling viciously a while, she runs towards the door and starts clumsily slapping the soundproof windows. People inside the restaurant notice this and wave back happily. Getting excited aren't you honey? I hit her spine with my knee, and throw her to the fence of the terrace, ass facing to my direction. Theres still some blood from her throat dribbling in my cock, so entering her batter hatch will be nice and easy.

I've spared an overdose of proteins just to f**k her today with maximum power. Her body feels kinda numb, so I get the feeling my protein savings are streaming down in vain. I slap her tits from behind and shout out "b***h YOU AWAKE?!". No response, I broke two of her fingers and shout out again "b***h YOU HEAR ME?!". Now I hear a "prrrllllllrhuhrll". Good, shes with me right on the moment of climax. I shoot our baby inside her, throw her on the chair, sit myself legs spread and lit a cigar. I feel worked out. Waiter steps inside the terrace and asks if we need anything. I ask him to take a picture from the two of us sipping the wine and enjoying the sunset. She's not very lively, I had to hold her glass and pour the wine down her mouth. That f**king jewish c**t, and this could have been a good memory! Waiter leaves and this calls for round two.

I'll shove her precious hair clip deep up her uretha and hang her up to the ceiling with her dress wrapped on her legs. I take my boxing gloves and beat her up till each one of her orifices explodes. "I... I'm sorry, I was wrong.." she squeals with weak tone and prays for my forgiviness. Does it feel good tutsypie? It's your turn to please me, my passionful and creamy tooth brush is ready to demolish that negligible and useless little mouth of yours pouring down snot and blood. Suddenly a rain of golden cap comes down the direction of ceiling and I see a fountain of piss squirting from her disfigured ureter, spilling in various directions from the slots between her hair clip stuck in deep. What a dazzling view.. I cant take this anymore, I'm in heaven.. I'm coming!! ahh ~

I found her tonque in the floor. I picked it up and will always keep it in my pants so I'll always feel and remember her. Waiter passed by our door and and I ordered the check. I told the waiter to take my tip and hit my companion's face with his platter few times. The end.

Liberating isn't it, letting a bit of that fantasy sweetness out.

[jrgp]

Some parts of it remind me of the shit I used to write in 9th grade.

"I found her tonque in the floor. I picked it up and will always keep it in my pants so I'll always feel and remember her."

[Jen(n)]

WTF....

[jrgp]

WTF....

In case you haven't gathered already, Smiluu is an extremely talented artist when it comes to drawing/writing, but the subject is always sick and twisted in some way or another.

[DarkCrusade]

Smiluu is an extremely talented artist when it comes to drawing/writing, but the subject is always sick and twisted in some way or another.

Because most "normal" art is an iteration of the same old shit.

[smiluu]

Some parts of it remind me of the s**t I used to write in 9th grade.

I think we could be brothers. Did you dig up your grandparents up for luls often too?

[jrgp]

Some parts of it remind me of the s**t I used to write in 9th grade.

I think we could be brothers. Did you dig up your grandparents up for luls often too?

Nah, that's a little too kinky for me.

I wouldn't mind writing a story about that though.

[Shard]

Its a little out there for my tastes. I do like your descritption though, even if some of them are a little morbid to say the least. I prefer your art to your literature.

[ds dude]

Smiluu you should make a porno.

[panda_bear_smoking]

Smiluu you should make a porno.

that mad me sick yet horny.  i second smilùú

[smiluu]

If it's porn you want, here's one collaborative porn project directed and written by me: *fucking deleted* (warning it has some porn). Feel free to toss your raw end and find the heaven buttons you never knew you had.

[ds dude]

Thank you.

[jrgp]

If it's porn you want, here's one collaborative porn project directed and written by me: *this too* (warning it has some porn). Feel free to toss your raw end and find the heaven buttons you never knew you had.

Somehow I never really considered lolokaust stuff porn. (I'm an avid reader of it) It's just gore/raping with nudity occasionally.

[echo_trail]

If it's porn you want, here's one collaborative porn project directed and written by me: *f**king deleted* (warning it has some porn). Feel free to toss your raw end and find the heaven buttons you never knew you had.

What the hell is wrong with you, you sick fuck?

jrgp, you're supposed to delete shit like this when you see it. Now I know I've been pretty lenient lately - too much probably - and I'm sorry about that. But this crosses the line. I suggest you hand out some sort of punishment.

[ds dude]

Yeah we need some punishment in here.

We need some good ol' hardcore spanking going on in here.

Cmon Moderators, spank those men.

[jrgp]

If it's porn you want, here's one collaborative porn project directed and written by me: *f**king deleted* (warning it has some porn). Feel free to toss your raw end and find the heaven buttons you never knew you had.

What the hell is wrong with you, you sick f**k?

jrgp, you're supposed to delete s**t like this when you see it. Now I know I've been pretty lenient lately - too much probably - and I'm sorry about that. But this crosses the line. I suggest you hand out some sort of punishment.

b-b-b-but echo, it's SonSukka, our crazy artist. He posted that in a matteroffactly not shockvalue/trollish way and it's his own work; he even put a warning. I can understand you snipping it from the post, but I don't feel it deserves punishment because he didn't post it to piss anyone off.

[echo_trail]

What was in the link, joe?

[jrgp]

What was in the link, joe?

Weird gore shit, I know. But still, I can see removing the link but I don't want go all over him as a result.

[L[0ne]R]

Smiluu is an extremely talented artist when it comes to drawing/writing, but the subject is always sick and twisted in some way or another.

Because most "normal" art is an iteration of the same old s**t.

Considering how many people are into dark, gory and twisted kind of stuff, I'd say this is pretty normal too. ;O

What was in the link, joe?

Weird gore s**t, I know. But still, I can see removing the link but I don't want go all over him as a result.

I think at least a small punishment should take place. He's well aware that his works can be disturbing for many people, and yet all he said was "it has some porn". I haven't seen it myself as the link was already removed, but there are still lines that shouldn't be crossed. Knowing Smiluu, I wouldn't be surprised if he did cross that line.

[jrgp]

I guess I might be getting soft and opinionated in my old age. What is your opinion, SonSukka? It's your mess so maybe you should choose your punishment, if you must have one.