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Offline Killya

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My first two maps
« on: March 23, 2009, 03:14:29 pm »
lol here are my two first maps....that is if one dosent count the failed sandcastle which is too ugly to be posted :D
I hope I'm not going agains any rules due to the P map.


P-Map
Deathmatch.
Not waypointed.

http://2dwrap.com/soldat/p.rar

Castle
Deathmatch.
Not waypointed.

http://2dwrap.com/soldat/castle.rar



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Offline Killya

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Re: My first two maps
« Reply #1 on: March 23, 2009, 03:35:29 pm »
Quote from: smiluu on March 23, 2009, 03:27:01 pm
Castle sucks, p-map f**ks.

Well thanx for the constructive criticism...
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Re: My first two maps
« Reply #2 on: March 23, 2009, 03:55:37 pm »
Well I think the first one is hilarious.
List of all tuts:http://forums.soldat.pl/index.php?topic=58.0
I suggest you read Beginners tut:http://forums.soldat.pl/index.php?topic=7283.0 and Shading tut:http://forums.soldat.pl/index.php?topic=9049.0 and all knowledge tut http://forums.soldat.pl/index.php?topic=29244.0.
They should help you with making more variation in your maps.
Another thing is from what I can see from your maps, is that spraying will be a problem. Try to make barriers or if that is not possible for the part of map your working on, adding colliders and small dips in the poly so that players have a way to evade shots. Wish you the best and I hope you continue mapping, everyone has great potential.
« Last Edit: March 23, 2009, 04:01:36 pm by jettlarue »
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Re: My first two maps
« Reply #3 on: March 24, 2009, 02:38:15 am »
Quote from: Killya on March 23, 2009, 03:35:29 pm
Quote from: smiluu on March 23, 2009, 03:27:01 pm
Castle sucks, p-map f**ks.

t as an idea aWell thanx for the constructive criticism...
Theres nothing to say really.
Critism is what you want thats what Im all about:

Castle has too simple architecture and it's too complicated for a deathmatch map.
Everyone can do map like that in one hour and It looks like you haven't even designed it.
It's just like a frustrating cathunt.

Penis is a great as an idea and I can feel your personality and heart there. 
But maps with a fancy new idea will end up to Worldtour servers where nobody plays anymore.
Sceneries are great and I see you got some sense of humor there, but they don't fulfill the requirement of layout and gameplay.

Castle: 2/10 Simple idea, simple layout and too f**king complex.
Penis: 5/10 Great idea, bad execution.
« Last Edit: March 24, 2009, 02:50:07 am by smiluu »
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Offline Killya

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Re: My first two maps
« Reply #4 on: March 24, 2009, 03:15:00 am »
Thanx jettlarue I can defenetly see how spread would be an issue and I will add some more things to hide behind. Thanx for the tut link, will read  ;D


"It looks like you haven't even designed it" lol and how did you come up with that analyze idiot, yeah I designed it and was pretty happy due to it literary being my second map.

"But maps with a fancy new idea will end up to Worldtour servers where nobody plays anymore." So your take is that one should give up any fun and new angels obiusly lol  ::) I think I will just ignore you smiluu from now on  :-X
« Last Edit: March 24, 2009, 05:12:50 am by Killya »
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Re: My first two maps
« Reply #5 on: March 24, 2009, 06:53:47 am »
Yes yes.. And I don't expect any improvement from you.

You didn't like bulls**t and now you didn't like criticism.
It's impossible to get your vagina twinkling damnit.
« Last Edit: March 24, 2009, 06:58:04 am by smiluu »
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Offline MasterMag

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Re: My first two maps
« Reply #6 on: March 24, 2009, 09:42:56 am »
Pretty cool maps there Killya! I like the humor :P
Actually this thread does contain some humor, that is smiluu. Nothing more than a joke. :D

Keep up the good work Killya!
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Re: My first two maps
« Reply #7 on: March 25, 2009, 02:27:54 am »
I think these two look really good for first maps, most first ones are ugly triangles badly coloured. Looks like you tried to work these two until being satisfied.

But as said above you have to think about the gameplay flow first of all, then the looks. My advice is to read the resources kindly pointed by jettlarue and to keep working this hard and you'll begin to make neat stuff.

Shalom ^^
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